2nd Period Notes

These are the notes for the 2nd runthrough of scenes for Period 2:

Boy's Life
Jake/Gary

• Very natural. Nice.
• Would there be music playing? Maybe "Late party" softer stuff? I don't know...
  
• Good work on lines. Make sure you're actually listening to each other: what would happen if your partner said something different at any given time? Would you notice?
• Cut the Nick part - we don't need it.
• Almost there, guys. Good work.

Hello, From Bertha
Christine/Cheyenne

• Very clear goals. Nice.
• Careful of your volume, Cheyenne.
• What would happen if you had a blanket?
• Christine: try some vocal variations - your upper & lower register - especially during those last couple of lines.
• Excellent work - get off book and the rest will take shape.

Black Thang
Shawntanique/Dymonde

• Dymonde - lose the jacket, it swallows you.
• Nice "You never knew that cat."
• The second half of this scene is much better than the 1st half. This means that you have to focus on your "moment before" a lot more to juice up the energy at the beginning.
• What happens if you do this on its feet? Tell the story visually.