Period 7 Final Notes

Crimes of the Heart
SarahPricillaNarmane

• Nice work on the lines. Emotions are next. Really work on that moment before.
• Meg - really be disturbed about how you treated GDaddy.
• Very clear. You guys need to build their "sister" relationship. If you have time outside of class, go do something fun together to bond a little bit. Need a big warm fuzzy hug at the end! Good work.

Crimes II
EliseStephAlyssa

Intro!? Great vocal work. Very clear. Actual phone ring? Lenny - how does it make you feel when she says "No" to still playing cards? Meg - after phone call, head straight to the purse & start getting ready. Are you really sorry about the candy? Lenny, feel free to flip out. Babe - what are you doing during the first part? (I know, so ask me if you can't figure it out.) Lenny - she ends up in tears: don't fake it, try to get there. Meg - don't rush last line, give us a second to catch our breath with you.

Boys & Girls
AngelaRobert

Great work on lines. What state of mind is she in at the top of the scene, Angela? Think about her moment before.
Robert - What's he doing? Hanging at her house, TV, dishes?
Ang- slow down; actually try to DO things to him: convince/persuade/coax/lure/seduce/threaten/bribe him to move in. Very clear goals. Tactics need to be clearer. Robert - hands in pockets whole scene - is that you or him? Methinks him.

Acting Experience
LenaJosh

• Excellent Moments Before!!!! Very good start - grabbed our attention! Good relationship - I believed that you have been together for a while.
• J-Gum!
• J- Show us how frustrated you are during "made love" speech. Careful of talking too fast.
• L - Have a paper. Great character & commitment to your goal.
• Very clear goals both.
• Excellent work both!!!!

Nice to Meet You

• Lauren- what are you doing at the top of the scene? Can it be something that makes us know where the scene takes place? Packing her stuff? Something.
• Good Moments Before, both.
• Lena - Weigh the heaviness of "Why did you decide to keep the house?" before you answer.
• Nice work.

Painted Rain

• Where are they? Use a bottle. Good relationship.
• Y- go after your goal! Good work on the text.
• C- Nice clear goal.
• Too long.

Last High School Party
ShawneshiaChelseaVanessa

• V-Moment Before! She just got Blowkissed! WooHoo!
• Listen to each other.
• Have fun with these guys!

Life Underwater
ShawneshiaKevin

• GUM!
• Nice character, Kevin
• D- Bit louder. Try to get your goal!

A Hatful of Rain
TrentonMark

• M-"I didn't get much sleep." Are you tired, then? Grumpy? =Moment Before
• Where does this take place? How can you show that?
• Make that "care" moment more important: take the time with it.
• T - be emotionally distracted by "that kid" through the whole scene.

At the Party
Artaysha

How many times have you guys actually read this scene, like twice? REHEARSE! REHEARSE! REHEARSE!

Pythagorian Therom
ChristinaAnthony

• Very clear. Good vocal quality. Get your heads out of the script, though, and listen to each other.
• TOO LONG!
• Go after your goals.
• Where are you? How can you show that?

Money
JoeJeff

• Very clear vocally.
• What happened with the chair? It didn't feel connected to the scene. Joe - you should find times to get up. He's not very intimidating while sitting down.
• TOO LONG!
• Go after your goals.